For a Mouse work this is really good. The next step for you would be upgrading your gear to a tablet. There are lots on the market for a good price and everything with pressure sensitivity is better than a mouse.
I feel that you have some very nice ideas and potential so don't let your gear hold you back!
As for now you can start with cleaning up your black lines. It has some charme to have multiple lines - if they have purpose!
Example: Santas coat. Makes it more rough and like its been through some stuff.
Bad example: Santas face. Get those helper lines out of the face! It just makes your picture look "not done yet"
Looking forward to some more art from you!
Thanks for the tip. Yes i agree it is not done and it was a little bit rushes. I saved the sketchy line work because i'm not good at color blending and either with depth, shading, light, perspective... I still need much much training.
The only technique i used for blending is basic wet brushes to get minimal blending effect, and other basic brushes. I had to constantly regulate opacity manually. it's possible to do very good paintings with mouse but it will require twice or even more the effort, skill and knowledge is also important.
Practice makes perfect!
I used to not colour my pieces too, but now i regret the time i did not use to practice.
Keep drawing and experimenting and it will get better over time :)
Really like it - but it could use a little less blur.
Like i said on the other Image - love the messy style <3
I really like this messy stile :)
Neck part bothers me a bit (could have been a bit more worked out)
The Heart really pops out and almost made me oversee the brush strokes on the upper left ;)
Thank you <3 I'll try to focus on the neck more as i usually just wing it so thank you for the tip ouo
Really nice lineart and matching tone.
Love the way you shaded the skill i'd love to see the full picture shaded like that. You startet at Santas cheek and then went a little too subtile.
Hair and hood completely lacks of shades which is a little sad.
A very nice picture nontheless! - Scouted.
I wasn't going to shade the skull that much but it looked a bit flat so I added a bit more. I liked Santa as it was even tho I agree they do look different.
Thank you for the feedback ^-^
Watch a lot of tutorials and practice hard!
This is a good starting point but there are a lot of flaws. (not even talking about anatomy)
If you need any help finding starting points on Digital Drawings feel free to contact me.
You will get there!
I can see the dedication you put into this work.
Some parts do look hand-Drawn - other pc only.
Totally legit and often used - but you should watch some tutorials for layering and freeing your Lineart from any artifacts.
Is the background a Photo?
Thank you for your comment.I apreciate it man.The angle messed me up a bit.... I really need to start using photoshop cause in Scetchbook pro is a bit sloppy and limited me ... I need to start making some simple one object drawings to learn more.I am not happy at all. But it was my second drawing on the tablet ...And in 2 days i think it is not that horrible :)... yeah the background is a picture that i manipulated and such cause of the lack of time. Thank you
Love the Cartoony style :)
Only thing that bothers me a bit are the white artifacts in the outlines. Maybe work on more layers to undo this effect?
Happy Holidays :)
If you think your Pictures are "art that is a piece of poo" ... you probably should not upload it.
Keep drawing and keep practicing - you will improve!
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